Hey guys i just wrote my first ever complete fan fic please read and tell me what you think don't be too harsh?

Hey that was pretty good. I'm taking Creative Writing in High School so i think u should send that too be published as a mini story! Hope I helped try to answer my question a href="http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AgTlokYegPHqlzjfPXdi.zzsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080905190615AAbWRQe"http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;…/a